Ashen Heart

The untamed fire ignites,
Your soul set ablaze.
Burning down to the core,
Watch your heart incinerate!

Watch it melting away,
Away, into the fiery haze.
Till the last drop of emotion,
The vestiges of love desiccate!

Let it suffocate your soul,
Let it empty you within.
Let it wreck your heart,
Let it burn away every sin!

Let your love, your hate,
Your tears be the fuel.
Let your heart reduce to ashes,
And when it finally cools.

You’ll have a stoical heart,
Rock strong, and Stone hard.
Nothing could tear you down,
Nothing could rip you apart!
You’ll be the Ashen heart,
You’ll be the Ashen heart!

Β©2016 The_Twilight_Firefly ALL RIGHTS RESERVED

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29 Comments Add yours

  1. I’m short of words to appreciate your writing skills. You are great. 😍❀
    I wish I could write such meaningful stuff. πŸ™ˆπŸ˜

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    1. Yayyyy!! I am soooo happy to hear this from you. Thankyou very much. πŸ˜‡β€

      And naa, your poems are wayyy more meaningful, I wish I could convey intense stories in a few lines, just like you, you are amazing!!! πŸ™ŒπŸ˜»

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    2. heheh!! Thank you thank you!! <3

      LOve <3

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  2. The Insider says:

    No shreya sharma… biggest fan is here…the insiderΒ©
    Great work πŸ‘
    Well done πŸ‘ŒπŸ’

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    1. Hahha, OMG!! πŸ˜‚
      Thankyou so much, Mr Insider. I’m glad you liked my work! β˜ΊπŸ‘

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  3. Kavita Chavda says:

    A very deep and beautiful piece of work!

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    1. Hey! Thankyou so much Kavita. I’m glad to hear that! ☺☺

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    2. Kavita Chavda says:

      Welcome :)

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  4. πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž

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    1. Hey! Thankyou very much! ☺☺

      Liked by 1 person

    2. You’re very welcome!☺☺

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  5. Wowww!!πŸ‘ that is so so amazing!!🎩hats off to you dear!!πŸ‘

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    1. Yayyy! I am so happy to hear this. Thankyou so much Vivek!! πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

      Like

  6. Amazing! Totally in love with this words. Indeed their are many words that i didn’t understand. I had to google for it. But amazing.

    And btw can we talk? I’ve something very important to discuss.

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    1. Yayyy!! Thankyou soo much. I am very happy that you liked it, and to the extent that you even googled to find the meanings! πŸ˜‚
      And yes, we’ll definitely talk. πŸ˜„

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    2. πŸ˜„ when? As said, I’ve to talk to you. ASAP.

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    3. Insta par aao, we’ll talk. :)

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  7. The Insider says:

    The MILLIONAIRE knocked

    Liked by 1 person

    1. OMG!! I’ll read right now! β˜ΊπŸ™Œ

      Liked by 1 person

  8. Happy gleaming, shining, prosperous Diwali to you! Keep shining and smiling ✨✨✨:)

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thankyou soo much Meenakshi ji. Happy Diwali to you too! ☺☺

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  9. Only One Word Lovely”

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    1. Thankyou very much! 😊

      Like

  10. Jackie Jain says:

    Wow.. Very inspiring post Chandni.. Nice vocab and flow of words.. Very intense. Very true, nothing can tear us down and rip us apart.. Ashen heart seems a creative concept.. Nice.

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    1. Hii Jackie!! I am soo happy to hear that you liked this post. Thankyou very much, hehe, yes, if we have an Ashen Heart, we’ll be the strongest! πŸ˜»πŸ™Œ

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    2. Jackie Jain says:

      You are welcome Chandni.. Yes, true that, but we all have broken hearts.. :P (in four pieces by default)..

      Happy weekend.. :)

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  11. Abhi Raj says:

    Masterpiece” πŸ’πŸ‘

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Eeee! Thankyou very much, Abhii! I am so glad. ☺☺☺

      Liked by 1 person

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