Hello people! Hehe, on my lovely readers’ demand, I am sharing another poem. I wrote this a week after I joined Facebook. π Do have a look and let me know your views. πΈ
Thereβs an app, called as Facebook,
Most of the teens give it a look. π€Facebook can make a lot of buddies,
But itβs better to concentrate on studies.Facebook pe hokar they wanna become cool, π
But ho jaate hain tensed, when they come to school.Saara time messages ko karte hain send,
Poochho toh kehte hain, βItβs todayβs trend.β πHota hai headache and health related trouble,
Eyesight weak and spelling mistakes double! πWhole day online with friends on chat,
Class me aate hi their mind goes flat. π²Chat par spellings get shortened in form,
And disregard of spellings then comes as a storm. π¨Should ko βshudβ, would ko βwudβ,
Ban gaye ho jaise Facebook ke Robin hood! πFacebook is a really big attraction,
But it does have some negative reaction. πIt is distracting the studentβs mind,
Better to stay away and be confined.On your studies, your mind you zoom,
And donβt waste time in silly chat-rooms. πGet to work for your future bright,
And attempt to achieve the greatest height. π
*Dated 17/05/2011*
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Nice take on Facebook!!!
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Thankyou! π
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Check out my blog too.
Hope you will like it π
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Ohh, yes sure. I’ll go through it soon. π
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Good one. I’m not a fan of ‘shud’ and ‘wud’ either! π
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Haha! π
Thankyou Shwetaa! π
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Haha And finally the wait is over :D
You wrote this beautifully. I also hate those facebook ke Robin hoods :D
Good work, keep these poems coming… :D
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Khushal!! π€ Thankyouu, btw, ye six years purana hai. πΉπΉ Again, I am happy to know that you liked it. ππ
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Haan i know padha mene :D i was saying aese jitne bhi hain sab share karo.. :D
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ππ Ohhh! Ji haan. Thankyou for your support, Khushal. βΊ I will share them all huh. π»
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Haha.. Mast h Chandni. . I laughed after reading this. Very funny, creative and more importantly, very deep. Our generation is becoming virtual day by day. . It’s good to some extent, but there should be a limit. I am happy that I decided not to log in to Facebook long ago. WordPress se bhi lamba break liya tha..
Kaise ho? Howz life? Howz college?
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Hii Jackie! π It’s been soooo long huh. And yes, I agree with your thoughts. Even I deactivated abi. It’s all useless. π Thankyou for appreciating. π
And I am very fine, life is going good too. βΊβΊ College, it’s boring this year. π Last year there were E-weeks and so many other seminars and stuff. Is baar there’s nothing much. π
Btw, aap kaise ho? π And why break from blogging? I remember last year you took that A-Z challenge in April. Are you doing it this year too? π» If yes, give me some suggestions. ππ
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You deserve it. And yes, FB is useless.
Glad you deactivated it.
Yes.. Took a long break from WordPress. I needed it.. Haha.. College cannot be boring.. Haha..
And I am fine. Was just occupied with many things. A-Z challenge. I completely got mentally drained during this challenge. Haha.. Suggestions for A-Z challenge, do it with full energy, be patient. Whatever interesting comes to your mind related to alphabets, go with it. Write less, but it should be deeper. Haha.. Anyway, don’t listen to anything I say. Do it your own way. Haha..
Happy Holi, Chandni.. Have a colorful day. :)
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Awww! π» Thankyouu for the suggestions, Jackie. βΊβΊ I will definitely keep all this in mind. And yesss, Happy Holi! Enjoy the day. β€ And glad that you’re back here. π€
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Haha… You are welcome. And thanks for the warm welcome.
Have a colorful day. :)
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You too. βΊβΊ
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Thank you. :)
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Great message!
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Ayushhh! π Thankyou so much. βΊβΊ
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Ms Moon, pls. make a poem on whatsapp too π
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Hello Sirji! π Ye sab toh I used to write in childhood. π Also, Facebook is useless na, I wrote all its drawbacks. πΉ WhatsApp is toh necessary, what should I write about it, any suggestions? π€π
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Let your creative mind take over, I am sure u will think of something!!
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Awww! Thankyouu. π I will definitely try. ππ
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Haha so cute π..But well written π.. I too was habitual of writing ‘uh’ to you and ‘meh’ to me and many more words made just for Facebook π..Now I feel embarrassed for that π…
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Bunnnnnny!! π» Even I was habitual of writing shortened spellings. Pata nai kis baat ki itni jaldi rehti thi. πΉπΉ But, abi we left Facebook, so we are saved. πΎπΉ And I’m sooo happy that you liked my silly poem. Thankyouuu! π€
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For me it wasn’t to go for shortened but I was trying to be different lol… Still sometimes I use noi for no π€ and some more words like these but I am changing my habit slowly slowly π.. and your poem is beautiful as well as indicating the problem of over using the social media by all of us ..We should be aware of it that it’s for spare time not for full time π
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Awww, noi noi this habit of yours is really cuuuute. π» Aapki vocabulary is unique and adorable. You shouldn’t change this habit huh. π
And yes, you’re right. 13 years old Firefly is teaching me what I need to do now. ππ Still learning self control huh. Social media is addictive. π
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Hehe okayz meh won’t change mah style of typing lol..And uh r right ..Social media is addictive but if we can get rid of Facebook so we can deal with other platforms too ππ
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Oooo, not this wali vocabulary. π This toh I don’t like. Aap jo normally bolte that is cute na. π Ye words noi laao, reading me difficulty hojati. π
Yayyyy, so there’s hope. π I can do it, yessss. ππ€
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Haha I knew it will annoy you ππ… And all the best to you for managing your social media issues ππΉ
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Huhh, how do you know everything? ππ Itni jyada jaankaari rakhna is dangerous. π And issues wali baat toh rehne do abi. Yahan nai bolo. π¬ππ I am good at handling things na. πππ€
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Okay main chup rahunga ji π
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πππ Yayyyyy, I win. βΊβΊ
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Haha!! Kudos to your creativity, Chandni! ππ
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ππ Bohhhhot shukriyaaaaa!
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