“This body speaks a language,
I fail to comprehend.
As if a perpetual state,
Of Amnesia, that never ends.
It speaks of the joys,
The triumphs, the falls.
I try hard to remember,
But can never recall.”


Here, I have tried to explain a weird feeling that I have always felt. I feel like my Body and my Soul are two different individuals. They have no connection to each other. I always feel a sense of incompleteness within myself.

Here, the soul says that this body speaks a different language that I am unable to understand. She (the body) speaks of her experiences, her joys, and struggles, but even though I (the soul) try harder and harder to remember, I am unable to recall these memories. It feels like I do not belong here, this isn’t me. I am something else, I am here for some different purpose, but I don’t yet know what. Hence, it goes into deep confusion and feels a sense of Amnesia (forgetfulness).

I have just tried to portray how it feels when the body and soul are not in sync. The soul feels a complete disconnection from the body. It has some Identity Crisis kind of thing. (Yay! Just learnt this new word, if I would’ve known this term before, I would’ve used in the lines above, huh! πŸ™€)

Is this feeling familiar to you, readers? Have you ever felt something like this, or is it just me? Is all this written above even understandable? πŸ˜†



14 Comments Add yours

  1. Rohit Nag says:

    Hey miss , yup even sometimes i felt so and yes u beautifully portrayed this not just portrayed but explained it exceptionally πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ keep going madame
    I can relate πŸ˜‡πŸ™ˆ

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    1. Rohitt! How are you? ☺ I am so happy someone could relate to these thoughts of mine. 😹 Thankyou so much. πŸ’™

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    2. Rohit Nag says:

      Hey, i am good . How are u doing ? Its really pleasure to read ur post . I read paneer in afternoon but not able to comment …will share my thought on that also πŸ˜‰

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    3. Ahaan. I am good too. ☺ Heheh, thankyou so much Rohit. πŸ˜ƒ

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  2. desilva1996 says:

    Yes I’ve felt this before

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    1. Glad you could relate. Thanks. :)


  3. well expressed. Loved it <3 :D

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    1. Thankyou Ratika! ☺☺

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    2. it’s my pleasure ❀

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  4. Woah! That was really deep Chandu. πŸ˜΅πŸ˜΅πŸ’žπŸ’“πŸ˜˜

    I loved it completely. And please keep on writing such things. πŸ˜πŸ‘ΌπŸ˜˜

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    1. Sirrrrr! Thankyou so so much. πŸ˜»πŸ™† I am so happppy. ☺☺

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    2. Be always happy like this <3

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  5. shivangee70 says:

    maza aa gaya padh kar ..nice

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    1. Haha, thanks. :)


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